多读多悟，多看多练，诗词写作提升快。
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p>多读多悟，多看多练，诗词写作提升快一一雁江区老年诗书画研究会诗词专委会张栋梁主任讲座纪实 </p><p>撰稿：潘湘禄</p><p>摄影：林顺华</p><p>编辑：韩秉学</p><p>审核：李克昌</p><p> 仲春三月，桃红李白，诗词讲座，娓娓道来……雁江区老年诗书画研究会三月初开学后，由诗词专委会主任张栋梁老师主讲“诗词绝句写作”的第一堂讲座，于3月13日上午在老年诗书画研究会活动室举行。 张栋梁主任原系侯家坪中学资深的语文教师。他从小就喜爱诗词写作，退休后仍坚持笔耕不辍，闲暇之余，创作不断，日臻完善，其诗词写作数量已近万余首，感觉已经了“质的飞跃”。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20250314100639front2_0_256964_Fim-_NR0FhT8M1AJS07xS9J9ZyJ7.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="1120" height="1494" 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今天诗词专委会的讲座，张栋梁老师从自己平日里写就的诗词作品中挑选出五首七言绝句，拟作为讲课的“范文”，逐一分析讲解，由浅入深，由此及彼，环环紧扣，娓娓道来；张栋梁老师这种生活化、通俗化、大众化的赏析讲解，让赴会到场的会员都听得来如痴如醉，台上场下，全然默契。张栋梁老师坚持数年诗词写作，感悟最深的就是“多读多悟+多看多练”，没有其他捷径！艺术源于生活，艺术高于生活，从诗词短短几句的“字里行间”，读者能感受到更多的生活日常与文化意趣，这就是诗词歌赋博大精深的魅力所在。诗词写作，尤其讲究“起承转合”，张栋梁老师以（唐）李绅《悯农》绝句诗为例，就“起承转合”创作手法讲得来既通俗易懂，又自然而然：从写景叙述到转合升华，最后“粒粒皆辛苦”——就是这首流传千年五言绝句诗《悯农》的主题主旨。 张栋梁老师还反复提及到，诗词写作需要注意的各类修辞手法，适当运用，必将大大地增光添彩。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20250314100702front2_0_256964_FhEcKeEz3x7Dj8eLRwTSDzc-9NKT.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="853" height="640" data-qf-origin="forum/20250314100702front2_0_256964_FhEcKeEz3x7Dj8eLRwTSDzc-9NKT.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20250314100702front2_0_256964_Fr5x4hvggmJtWyEI8dk3uxIRcMwb.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="746" height="560" data-qf-origin="forum/20250314100702front2_0_256964_Fr5x4hvggmJtWyEI8dk3uxIRcMwb.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p> </p><p> 讲座结束时，雁江区老年诗书画研究会会长李克昌作了简短小结。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20250314100722front2_0_256964_Fqz1th2Sct3PJb77u5orM_9VyYJg.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="853" height="640" data-qf-origin="forum/20250314100722front2_0_256964_Fqz1th2Sct3PJb77u5orM_9VyYJg.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p> </p><p> 他说：今天，诗词专委主任张栋梁老师为我们带来了一场干货满满的分享。在诗词创作领域深耕多年、有着极为丰富写作经验的张老师，摒弃了晦涩难懂的专业术语，以平实生动的语言、旁征博引的论述，将写诗过程中诸如立意构思、韵律推敲、意象选用等要点，由浅入深、条理清晰地为我们一一拆解分析 ，让每一位参会者都能轻松领会其中要义。强调多读多练、多看多写，这无疑是提升诗词创作水平的必经之路。在掌握要领和方法上，详细阐释了创作绝句的“起、承、转、合”，让原本抽象的诗词创作技巧变得具体可感。起句定开端，承句衔接自然，转句峰回路转，合句升华主题，三、四句连贯一气，这为我们今后的绝句创作提供了清晰的思路和框架 。 不仅如此，张老师还以自己创作的五首绝句为例，从人、事、景、物四个维度深入剖析创作手法，让我们真切体会到理论如何在实践中运用。讲解过程中，张老师引经据典、声情并茂，在座的各位都沉浸其中，收获颇丰。相信大家和我一样，心中对诗词创作有了新的感悟和方向。</p><p> 今天雁江区老年诗书画研究会诗词专委会的首场讲座，雁江区老年大学文学创作研讨班张慧群老师带领一众热爱诗词歌赋的嘉宾也莅临到场，让整个讲座活动更是蓬荜生辉，全体会员都向他（她）们表示诚挚感谢和热烈欢迎。雁江区老年大学文学创作研讨班和雁江区老年诗书画研究会诗词专委会，都有着相同相近的文学艺术爱好——彼此“一般高”，你我“姊妹花”，在今后的文学艺术创作方面，互相交流沟通，彼此切磋互动，大家精诚合作，必将互利双赢，何乐不为？衷心祈愿：雁江区老年诗书画研究会，更富活力，更具特色，更上一层楼！</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img 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情真幸杖朝结友缘，可叹唯恨相见晚。同志潜心乐推敲，互利共勉壮诗胆。</p><p> 结束诗莫道人生相逢迟，今朝有缘诚相知。同挥彩笔抒胸臆，写满星河灿烂诗。</p><p>李克昌会长特赋诗二首： 一诗海扬帆岁月悠，张师倾授解吾忧。旁征典故传真意，细析词章展睿谋。起承转合藏妙理，人事物景韵中留。今朝幸得金言悟，此后挥毫志未休。</p><p> 二韵海茫茫苦渡舟，幸逢张师引迷流。起承转合析精妙，典故今文信手收。绝句四章呈万象，人事物景韵长留。醍醐灌顶茅塞解，愿逐诗心共探求。</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20250314100932front2_0_256964_Fh3SThp9Dqoc3VShTfLHSL1-5GxF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="853" height="640" data-qf-origin="forum/20250314100932front2_0_256964_Fh3SThp9Dqoc3VShTfLHSL1-5GxF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img 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