李朋能房产 发表于 2024-3-20 07:51

咏花

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李朋能房产 发表于 2024-3-20 08:12

搞笑原版是这样的：
咏花

远看一朵花，

近看也是花，

越看越像疤，

哎哟，

我的妈呀！

原来就是她！

落羽神恋曲 发表于 2024-3-20 22:24

近看全是花

落羽神恋曲 发表于 2024-3-20 22:24

加油写诗！

血雨腥风 发表于 2024-3-21 10:00

加油加油

血雨腥风 发表于 2024-3-21 10:00

期待佳作

封狼居胥 发表于 2024-3-21 23:26

不错不错嘛

封狼居胥 发表于 2024-3-21 23:26

继续创作

风雪夜归人 发表于 2024-3-21 23:32

全是花，哈哈

风雪夜归人 发表于 2024-3-21 23:32

楼主好雅兴
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