归来一闲翁 发表于 2023-5-31 13:15

七律.徒步九曲河游天宫桥

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531130723front2_0_271101_Fi2DIMH2XW3Hana9i5LIt3zcr3OB.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="612" height="816" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531130723front2_0_271101_Fi2DIMH2XW3Hana9i5LIt3zcr3OB.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><h3>七律.徒步九曲河游天宫桥</h3><p class="">&nbsp;</p><p class="">图文 / 归来一闲翁</p><p class="">&nbsp;</p><h3>九曲河上景嫣然，</h3><h3>天宫桥影梦江南。</h3><h3>桥头浓荫遮日月，</h3><h3>岸上高楼接云天。</h3><p class="">&nbsp;</p><h3>天阶起伏如翻浪，</h3><h3>宫灯点缀似游园。</h3><h3>忽有美人桥上过，</h3><h3>疑是仙女下凡间。</h3><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531130242front2_0_271101_Fn5Mbs7cHuQ1-3f0msG6GDic-NpI.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="816" height="612" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531130242front2_0_271101_Fn5Mbs7cHuQ1-3f0msG6GDic-NpI.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531135624front2_0_271101_FtaVK1crMMD18wAkxslOzKobcTWc.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="816" height="612" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531135624front2_0_271101_FtaVK1crMMD18wAkxslOzKobcTWc.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531131020front2_0_271101_FhNoWEkd6Y3w3ouurgsZde-ravjP.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="816" height="612" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531131020front2_0_271101_FhNoWEkd6Y3w3ouurgsZde-ravjP.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531131202front2_0_271101_FmNsywo1xfErdIvjFj2HnhnlHpMU.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="816" height="612" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531131202front2_0_271101_FmNsywo1xfErdIvjFj2HnhnlHpMU.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20230531131036front2_0_271101_FqBwuMjx2qUI0SYMw18TyC18VdfD.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="612" height="816" data-qf-origin="forum/20230531131036front2_0_271101_FqBwuMjx2qUI0SYMw18TyC18VdfD.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph" style="min-height: 25px;">&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

平淡李 发表于 2023-6-1 09:48

河友文采过人

落羽神恋曲 发表于 2023-5-31 21:01

李老师是行家，就是（昌哥哥）

血雨腥风 发表于 2023-5-31 20:21

河友写得很好

斩魄 发表于 2023-5-31 20:04

写得真好

通天教主 发表于 2023-5-31 19:35

河友文采过人

o∩龙∩o 发表于 2023-5-31 15:13

原 创啊

归来一闲翁 发表于 2023-5-31 15:35

o∩龙∩o 发表于 2023-5-31 15:13
原 创啊

平仄没有推敲，望指教！

归来一闲翁 发表于 2023-5-31 18:04

平仄、用韵、对仗是否符合格律要求，求河友中的专家和前辈指教一二，不甚感谢！

落羽神恋曲 发表于 2023-5-31 21:01

感谢分享，给你点赞！下次有这样的好内容，记得分享哦~

归来一闲翁 发表于 2023-6-1 08:42

通天教主 发表于 2023-5-31 19:35
河友文采过人

谬赞了！
页: [1] 2
查看完整版本: 七律.徒步九曲河游天宫桥