对伍剑依女士长篇校园题材小说《昨日之灯》的再探讨
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010499"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p> 对伍剑依女士长篇校园</p><p> 题材小说《昨日之灯》的再探讨 罗允琪 </p><p> 我，作为一位终身从事教育工作的园丁，对《昨日之灯》有着特殊的认识与理解，不仅从作品本身的艺术性一一客观反映在校园中所发生的那一幕幕真实的学生早恋经历，让我有如″发现新大陆″式的惊讶！那就是教育工作者们曾经十分重视而不得解密的校园禁区，更是无人敢于揭示、暴露的一个写作命题一一亦即作品的思想性。但是，作家伍剑依女士做到了，以《昨日之灯》客观朴素地向人们、向社会反映了这一主题，就其写作的主观动机来看，是在记录豆蔻年华时代那一场刻骨铭心、纯真无邪的少女少男之恋，并把它作为自己人生历程的重大事件记录下来。以致持续长达30年之久，终于几易其稿，写了又写，方才付梓了却宿愿！ </p><p> 据作者本人说的，之所以命题“昨日之灯″，是想将它作为激励今天人生旅途，为之奋斗的动力一一能做到吗？！却在客观上向人们、向社会、向时代，揭示了″早恋″害人误人，这一传统的校园命题，这一生理反应。客观上指出了这是伤害、影响少男少女学业进步和前程规划的罪魁祸首。但又如何遏制、如何教育、如何疏导呢，却给我们再次敲响了警钟。 </p><p> 笔者罗允琪，就此同《昨日之灯》作者伍剑依女士，作了坦诚的微信对话、交流，以下就分别以罗、伍代称双方，披露、探讨关于《昨日之灯》的谈话内容吧。</p><p> </p><p>罗(网文编后发问)：</p><p> 韦麦是作者自己吧？后来婚姻家庭又选择的局外人吗还是青梅竹马的同学或是仰慕的老师呢？ 萧亚因公眼瞎，成了盲人作家这可是真有其例？而且能去北京参加会议，说明还是人中俊杰啊！ 出家的黄宇和同乡的费平以后的际遇又是怎样的呢？ </p><p> 华老师以后发展如何，家庭怎样？ </p><p> 总的来说，这部以青春少男少女的朦胧爱情为基础的写实小说还是一部早恋弃学的悲剧！ </p><p> 如果当初大家都在学习上去努力下功夫，应该说都有可能升上大学或中专，去分配到一个有保障的正式工作，亦或是投入改革开放打工潮的洪流中去当一个小老板、企业主，彭小燕也不至于失身误嫁而落水早逝，大家也不至于带着情绪去出家，去远方。甚至还可以几个同学分别组成家庭后仍保持着联系，相约过年回家时聚会，来共同看望老师，重访母校，去续写、发展美好人生的新篇章，对吧？ </p><p> 愿意回答我提出的以下几个问题吗？</p><p> </p><p>伍：回答罗老师：</p><p>1、韦麦有多半作者的影子，婚姻是局外人</p><p>2、萧亚去漠河是真的，走上文学道路也是真的，但是没成盲人3、黄宇在深圳发展有了成就是真的，到处寻找作者邀请她去深圳也是真的，作者拒绝也是真的。 </p><p>3.费平伤人入狱也是真的，在老家开茶馆，2017年已经过世，因为当初他就一直说因为这辈子和作者没有缘分，不愿意在世间多久</p><p>4、华远老师后来为了结婚而结婚，随便匆匆找了一个女人目前在XX一个学校当校长。</p><p> </p><p>罗：谢谢回答！我认为还是早恋悲剧的说法，你赞同吗？</p><p> </p><p>伍：不一定。</p><p> </p><p>罗：四个男性一一分别早逝；婚姻草率难有真爱；有了成就可意中人难得，而真爱者又难遂愿而劳燕分飞，只是在一定程度上激励了男女主角双方，各自在人生的道路上收获了希望一一但却毁了另外三个配角啊！是吧？</p><p> </p><p>伍：那也是没有办法的事！早恋可控吗？其实每个人都有自己的宿命！</p><p> </p><p>罗： 宿命是唯心的说法，对命运说不清了而用以代之。古人说，天时，地利，人和是事业成功的三要素。人本身作为主体是否有能力，意志，愿吃苦？是先决条件，而属客观条件的天地人(又称″三才″)条件又是否有利于你，这才是助你成功与否的关键！是吧？ (11.27.)</p><p>罗：昨天的探讨是对《昨日之灯》进一步的深化理解。你的这一部处女作之所以能一炮打响，受到读者的青睐要从两个方面来看，一是你的写作题材新颖，且属亲身经历、献身说法，娓娓道来，别无雕琢、浮华、虚妄之嫌，且为少男少女真实心态言行的再现；既有以主人公韦麦的主线又同时几项分支同时展开，收放自如；成功的人物描写，特别是心理活动的描写，让几个主要人物的个性展示充分，加上环境描写的适时衬托，让故事情节生动、跌宕起伏、耐人寻味……。 再从这部描写校园生活的长篇小说题材，与历来作品不同之处是直击讳莫如深的学生早恋的实质，把学校管理者防不胜防，视作洪水猛兽的校园积案以少男少女们懵懂朦胧的荷尔蒙冲动，以轻松自然、天真无邪的故事表现出来，不以世俗的眼光去指责、遏制。属实开创了一代校园题材的先河，打开了戒备森严，少人知晓的写作禁区，这是一种大胆的尝试与发韧吧。 </p><p> 再从《昨日之灯》表达的主题来说，作者似乎是在把人生当中曾经经历的那一段刻骨铭心，难以忘却的少女之恋记录下来，希图以″昨日之灯″照亮今天人生之路，是以正面歌赞那逝去的，渐行渐远的青春少年时光，没有后悔，只有标榜一一因为那是一段至纯至尚、白璧无暇的看似平静却是轰轰的爱情争夺战啊！这是作者主观上极力要表达出来的主题思想。 </p><p> 其实，一部成功的文学作品表达的主题，正是作品反映的社会现实的印记，是社会百态在作品中的折射，这是不以作者的主观意志为转移的！ </p><p> 为什么在校园中要那么严防学生早恋？为什么家长会主动与学校配合防微杜渐？这都是明摆着的，是中华民族的国情和风俗所限。这一些与西方社会的学生早恋和″杯水主义″的民情水火不容的。尽管这些年西风东渐，成人的婚姻观有些随意了，但对中学生的早恋，在我们国家还是严格禁止的，只是采取了堵不如疏，如对青春学生进行性知识教育，正确认识、对待自己的青春期。再从学校的封闭式管理，男女生公寓的严格管理等各方面都在防范和杜绝，一旦发现苗头迹象，轻则教育劝止，重则责令退转学校的处理。 </p><p> 《昨日之灯》以四男一女为主线的四角恋爱(这里还不说师生恋的违法)，不仅在当时会影响各自的学习，导至连一所学校毕业班的尖子生都考不上重点中学，再上大学深造。并且卷入旋涡中心的四男一女都没有收获到初恋的果实一一修成正果，组成家庭，而是各自带着伤痕，劳燕分飞一一厌弃人生而早逝，草率婚姻无幸福，远走北国遇伤病，打拼深圳盼知音，这四男都幸福吗？ </p><p> 作为女主角的韦麦，聪明、俊秀，品学皆优，稳重自恃，本可成为一名重点大学的高才生，因为出色而成为俊男们心中的偶像，追逐的梦中情人，而能游刃，应付于众人之间可望而不可及，这可是难能可贵，百里难一的啊！这一点也正是作者在书中强调过的，是她家传统、严格的家教结果！而另一配角彭小燕的遭遇恰成反证。尽管如此，韦麦的人生也重新改写，不说让四位俊男带上各自遗憾，抱恨终身，而自已的似锦前程，光辉人生，不也是受到冲击而改变了吗？虽然，有志者事竟成，另辟蹊径，重新闯出了一条人生之路，但收获到了初恋的爱情了吗？ </p><p> 综上所述，《昨日之灯》以其新颖的题材，细腻的笔触向人们揭示了一个郑重而严肃的命题一一早恋是没有结果的一场″甜蜜而苦涩″的人生误区，青春陷阱！ </p><p>伍：罗老师这个解读也算是客观的。</p><p> </p><p>罗：赞同吧？</p><p> </p><p>伍：现在的学生，随意开始男女两性关系怀孕打胎的多得很，很多都不能幸免！这个尺度上来说，韦麦值得点赞，坦荡克制理性！</p><p> </p><p>伍：我根本就没想到早恋问题来，其实质肯定是一份比较美好的早恋体验吧！不管结果如何！</p><p> </p><p>罗：今天的大学生恋爱、同居已成公开社会现象，社会上成年人的婚恋观，已造成离婚率和单亲家庭比例的极速上升，传统的家庭责任观念已大大受到冲击，逐渐淡薄！这是西风东渐的冲击，这是缺乏民族自信心的表现，这是西方文化侵略的恶果！好在我们国家已经引起高度重视了！</p><p> </p><p>伍：我不是说大学生，XX师范这类学校。</p><p> </p><p>罗：但对中学生中的早恋，却还是丝毫没有放松管控的，对吧？</p><p> </p><p>伍：这个是，还是疏导比较科学。</p><p> </p><p>罗：伍剑依女士，昨天和今天我们的探讨，我认为是一种对你的作品的深层次的理解，你认可吗？</p><p> 还有就是这个作品所展示的社会问题和主题思想，也可能是正如你说的那样，是你在创作时没想到的，你只想到早恋的美好，去把它记录下来。而成为文学作品后，它所产生的社会反响与效应，却是不能以你的创作初衷所能够左右的。而是有了划时代的警示作用！所以这部《昨日之灯》从艺术性方面的可读性，又特别是思想性方面来说，都是很重要的，有特色的。就在这一点上，你是第一个吃螃蟹的人，你客观地揭示了校园早恋现象的真实内涵，让人们清楚地看到了曾经在条件简陋，管理欠善的乡村中学校园里，曾经发生过的那一场四男一女的少男少女间的五角早恋，结果是五败俱伤，无一幸免，其中没有一个人收获到了那场早恋的甜蜜，留下的可是那无尽的悔恨(也许未必)和思恋一一以至终生啊！</p><p> 作者主观上认识，这是白璧无瑕的少女少男们(那位老师应例外)纯真朦胧之恋，但这种现象在我们国家，我们民族却是不允许的，你觉得呢？</p><p> </p><p>伍： 我14号开始了一篇诗歌，没写完！ </p><p> 不太会写诗歌，之前收到孟主席通知的。</p><p> 2022.11.29.</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pic.app.jiuquhe.com/forum/20221129190712front2_0_268763_Fguhr4AMPHTe4I7aqkjpIVXaWk6n.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpYy5hcHAuaml1cXVoZS5jb20vd2F0ZXJfaW1nXzIwMjAxMjA3XzQzOC5qcGc=/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthWest" alt="" width="600" height="800" 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